ENF: My Crush and the Pool Party

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The girl I really like (Abigail) is shy about her body even though she's drop dead gorgeous, so she doesn't usually wear two piece bathing suits. Even when she does, 1. it's not a stringed bikini, so there's no risk of the strings getting untied and 2. she usually wears a coverup over her bottom half. So, she and I just graduated high school during the summer and with college coming up, she figured it was time to try new things. A couple of her friends convinced her to get a two piece string bikini with no cover up on for an up-coming pool party that I was also invited to. My crush reluctantly agreed and got a purple bikini with pink flowers on the top and bottoms. 

At the party, she got a few stares from some of the 20 something guys at the party, including myself. I tried not to stare at her too much so I wouldn't creep her out, but I couldn't help but look. Abi noticed that I was looking at her a lot, and even though I sometimes pretended not to, it was obvious and I was horrible at faking it. It was easy for her to tell that I was checking her out. She knows how I feel about her, but she doesn't feel the same way. When I asked her if she wanted to hang out as friends some time, she told me she wasn't interested in being friends. She doesn't hate me per se, but she didn't want anything to do with me either, so she wasn't all that excited when she saw that I was there too. This was the first time where we were in the same place together besides school and it was also the first time I saw my crush in a bathing suit in person. You could only imagine how excited I was.

She was used to people complimenting her on her looks when she posts pictures on facebook, but this was the first time she wore something reveling like this, although the bikini itself wasn't even all that revealing compared to other bikinis the other girls were wearing. It covered everything very well, but since my feelings for Abi were so strong, it made her even more attractive for me since she doesn't even need to wear revealing outfits to make me feel attracted to her to begin with. She could be wearing sweatpants and a sweatshirt with her hair messed up with no makeup on and I would still think she's beautiful.

At first Abi was really nervous (and I felt bad since I wasn't really helping the situation by looking at her), so she spent a lot of time in the water where her body was at least somewhat hidden. Her friends saw that she felt a little uncomfortable, but they told her to stop thinking about it and have a good time. It was a party and she was there to have fun. About an hour or so later, Abi thought more about what her friends said and eventually she felt more confident about being in a bikini in front of everyone and really enjoyed the party. Eventually Abi decided to go off the diving board, not being prepared for what was about to happen.

I wasn't much of a pool party guy mainly because I'm shy about my body too and didn't wear shorts or take my shirt off in front of people, so naturally I just sat in the pool area on a lounge chair. I was only there, because some of my friends were there, and I thought it would be nice to get out of the house. Abi was walking towards the diving board, and when she passed by me she waved at me a little and had a little smirk on her face like she was saying to herself; "Wow! He's STILL looking at me?". So she jumped considerably high in the air given her short size (she's not even 5 feet tall), and dived right in. When she got came back up she had a huge smile on her face. She was really having fun. I love seeing her happy, so the smile on her face made me smile too.

My crush got out of the pool to check her phone (which was on the chair close to the one I was laying on) and that's when I saw the most amazing thing I had ever seen. My jaws dropped, and I had my hand over my mouth in shock. My eyes opened as wide as they could and I couldn't blink. It was hard enough to stop looking at her to begin with, but now it was physically impossible for me to take my eyes off of her. Everyone at the party focused on her for that few minutes. Most of the people at the party were had shocked expressions on their faces from what they were seeing and others looked as if they were about to laugh. My crush didn't notice them though since she wasn’t paying too much attention to them. She caught my eyes glued in her direction and looked at me with a short sigh. She walked towards me and said to me; "So, lover boy, what are YOU looking at?" with a large smile on her face. She sounded like she was starting to get a little annoyed, but at the same time, she didn’t want to be too hard on me. She was having a good time and she didn’t want to get herself worked up by the fact that I was there. As she got closer to me, I felt my heart was beating even faster than it already was. Without saying anything since I was too shocked to even say a single word, I was looking from into her eyes up and down on the rest of the body her body to give her a signal. Abi was confused by what I was trying to say and her smile immediately went away as she looked down, terrified to find out what had happened.

Abi’s bikini (the top AND bottoms) had fallen off. She was COMPLETELY NAKED and everyone at the party could see her! She looked back up humiliated beyond all words about the fact that I was looking at her private parts and that's when she thought about everyone else. Her eyes grew even wider as she turned around and to her horror, people from all angles were looking at her. Some of them even had their phones and cameras out to take pictures and record her. I felt like I should have done something, because even though I was having the time of my life at that moment, I felt really bad for her. This is a girl, who hates showing off her body and didn't even want to wear a bikini at first and here she was stark naked with all the boys being able to see every inch of her naked body. For her, it was like being naked in front of an endless crowd of people looking at her without being able to do anything about it. Those few minutes seemed like an eternity to her. I didn’t bring a towel since I wasn’t planning on going swimming so I didn’t have anything to give to her so she could cover herself. Even if I did have something to give her, she was too horrified to even cover herself with her hands or at least jump back in the water where she could be hidden or get her bikini back and put it back on. She probably thought that there wasn't any point in covering herself anyway since everyone had already saw everything. To make matters worse, she left all of her clothes in her friend's car, and her friend left shortly before the incident, because she forgot her sunglasses at home and wanted to go get them.

The poor girl didn't even know how to react. You could tell she just wanted to undo that moment. I felt horrible knowing that the girl of my dreams was in this situation and I was only part of the problem by looking at her. I wanted to help, but at the same time, I just wanted to keep looking. This was a once in a lifetime chance for me. After all, in her perspective, I’m just some weird guy who has a huge crush on her. The only reason why both of us were here was because we both just happened to be invited. Other than that, we never see each other outside of school. With school done and us going to separate colleges, I couldn’t help but enjoy the view while it lasted. I was looking at the girl of my dreams BUTT NAKED with everything showing as she was just inches away from me! It was more amazing than I imagined it! I was always too shy to talk to her when I saw her in the hallway, and that was when she had clothes on! When she first came out of the pool naked and started walking towards me with her female parts exposed, to the point where she was in arms reach of me, I was speechless!

I was still behind Abi with her butt facing me as she was too busy worrying about the dozens of guys that were staring at her from head to toe from the front. She was small, so she didn’t have big boobs or a big butt, but she still looked amazing naked. I couldn’t help but stare at her nice, round butt almost the entire time since she turned around. I was tempted to take a few pics, but I didn’t want to make things worse for her. Besides, if I wanted a pic, I could just get some from someone else after the party. However, even though I wasn’t going to take pictures of her naked, that wasn’t enough to resist my urge to grab her butt. I took a deep breath and started to go for it. I couldn’t help myself. I figured that this would be the only time I would ever see Abi naked and I would let myself enjoy the moment while it lasted.

Some of the people were laughing at me since I was practically frozen from shock to do anything. They knew it was typical me and most of them already knew how I felt about Abi. As I was reaching for Abi’s butt, some of them (mainly the girls who knew me for being the shy type) were cheering me on. When both of my hands were squeezing each of her butt cheeks one of them shouted “Yeah! Grab that butt! Wooooo!”. After I did that, Abi immediately turned around and covered her butt with her hands. Her face was red with embarrassment and she was surprised that I, of all people, would do that. I felt kinda bad, but at the same time I was glad that I did it. I wasn’t expecting her to turn around so fast, so when I suddenly found her frontal areas facing me, it made me jump a little. I looked at her in the eyes for a second, but I soon found myself looking between her legs at her lady bits. I looked back up at her and couldn’t help but smile at what I was seeing. Abi knew I liked her, so she knew that I was enjoying this the most.

Abi turned around back in forth with the dozens of people looking at her and still taking pictures as she looked like she was about to cry. She knew waiting for her friend to get back with her clothes was pointless and her house was on the other side of the street, so she decided to make a run for it. As she dashed out of the backyard, some of the people from the party followed her with their phones all the way to the end of the street. She didn’t even bother to cover herself on the way. As my crush ran, there were other people outside their houses as well as cars passing by on the way who all saw her. They all laughed and honked their horns at her. She finally made it home after a few minutes, but it was too late by then. Meanwhile, back at the party, the girls who knew I liked Abi started showing me the pictures and videos they took. I felt guilty about looking at them and even going so far as to ask some of them to send them to me, so thought I would go to her house and try to comfort her.

 I rang the doorbell, and when Abi answered the door, she was still naked, but when she saw it was me, she quickly put her hand over her private area to cover up this time. She looked at me with tears in her eyes and just said “hey”. I asked her if it was ok to come in and she said it was fine. She stopped covering herself as she sat on the couch with me next to her. I apologized to her for looking at her the way I did and for touching her butt, and her response really surprised me. She said “It’s ok, I guess. It’s not your fault that my bikini fell off.” I was surprised that she didn’t punch me in the face or something, because she didn’t want anything to do with me at first, and I thought she would never forgive me. There were guys at the party that she thought were cute, so if any of them were to touch her while she was naked, I know that I wasn’t exactly her first choice. “You’ve liked me for a long time now, so I understand why you got excited and wanted to touch me when you saw me naked. I know you didn’t mean any harm.”, she told me. She let out a short sigh of disbelief of what happened. I wiped the tears off her face and gave her my shirt to cover up with. She was small enough for it to cover everything (even though I’m still only a few inches taller than her). In retrospect, I probably should have done that to begin with, but I was too excited about seeing my crush naked to give it to her.

After she put it on, she chuckled a little bit with a little smirk on her face and said “Thanks”. “Also, thanks for not laughing at me and taking pictures like everyone else was.”, she said to me. Abi was silent for most of the time I was there, which was about an hour. We were just sitting on the couch with her resting her head on my shoulders. She was taking deep breaths to try to calm down and I occasionally put my arm around her, to which she sometimes responded with a short smile. When I told her I was going to go back to the party to get my stuff and then probably head home afterwards, she said “Thanks for being there for me, even though I probably don’t deserve it. You’re always so nice to me and all I do is push you away.” I told her it was alright. I joked about what she said earlier and told her “I didn’t laugh when I saw you naked, because there was nothing to laugh about.” I winked at her and she laughed a little. Guys complimented her all the time, but there wasn’t anything that made a big deal about Abi’s looks as much as I did. I’m glad I was able to cheer her up. Abi asked me if she could see my phone and when I gave it to her, she put her number in it and told me to text her sometime! Until now, the thought of us being friends seemed alien to her, but now here she was putting her number into my phone without even giving it a second thought! She gave me my shirt back, but I guess she forgot that she was still naked underneath. I was just smiling at her when she handed it to me and when she she looked down, she realized why and covered herself right away. She was like “ooops! Hahaha!”. Before I walked out the door, she hugged me WHILE SHE WAS STILL NAKED!! It’s like she didn’t even care anymore. We hugged for a few seconds, and as expected, my hormones got the best of me once again. I squeezed her butt again and she pushed me off of her while she laughed at it, but we hugged one more time before I left. She said to me “So, I guess I’ll see you around.” I said “Of course!” as we both smiled at each other. As I was checking her out for a few more seconds, she quickly covered up and said “I’m going to go put some clothes on right now.” As I was leaving the house, I turned back around to get one more glimpse of her naked body as he was running upstairs to her room before closing the door behind me. It was by far the best day of my life.

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This would be a beautiful memory for the guy. If I was him, I would have at least kissed her on the cheek before leaving her home. A beautiful, naked girl deserves the love 💘